Wednesday, November 6, 2013

Essays 2-02a: My Favorite Place in The World

I'd like to introduce my favorite place. It is in the my car! I named this car when I was given it. It is Lemonade because it's color is cream and I love lemonade. I  set up it is a boy. He was came down from my mother to my older sister, and to me. So he is almost ten years old and run over ten bilion kirometor! Because of he is minicar, not so big, but I am content to this extend.

There are four reason why I like in the my car. First, it is only mine place. I'm relax better than my room. I don't know the reason. Second, in the car smell good. I put an aromatic and this smell is my favorite. Third, I can sing a song lowdly. I ride on car, I started singing in a twinkle. Actually I want to go Karaoke, but I don't have enough time and money. So I could find good place to sing! Fourth, I can go anywhere I want. I can drive highway, mountain, and path!

Driving car cost lots of money. I need to get some gas about twice a month. Recently, gasoline price rise more and more, it is seriously problem for us. And I need to do autmobile inspection once a year. I surprised hear that prise  at the first time because it too high! But it is essantionaly to avoid to car accident. It was pay my fahter.

I love my car but sometimes There is the moment I hate. It need to clean inside and outside, especially I drived dirt road. My lemonade bottom became dirty. And I'm good at trash-filled. I am often attended my sister when I ride with her. I also don't like accident. I clashed with pole once, that pole was well but my lovely car was terrible. The right side pigment pole and so get dented. I feel down for one week. And I have to pay four handred doll to fix them.

I always drive car safety especially ride with my family and friends. Sometimes I pick my grand mother and friends up in the hospital and station. I like alone but talk with someone is also very interesting. I can't sing a song that time but it is ok. I couldn't concentrate on driving while talk with someone before but now I got ride of this problem!!

I use lemonade when I go to part-time job, go shopping, go to scholl, go to club actibity and pick someone up. I like to go somewhere alone, so I often go. I thought that I can wide my world thanks to have my car. I had difficulty with learning road before but I drive own, I remenber more easily. I LOVE my car and I will enjoy driving!!!
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7 comments:

  1. Own car is the place what can relaxing. I think so too. You loves your car. It's so good! I want to new car! Anyway Be careful car clash Nana!!!!

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    1. I'll do safety drive!! Thank you fot comment.

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  2. Your essay is great. Your car's name is good and cute. Where is the place which you drove to a distance most by car? I suggest you write word count.

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    1. I haven't gone outside of Kumamoto by my car. So maybe it was Yatsushiro!

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  3. Your essay is fun to read. What kind of songs do you sing in your car? I sometimes sing when I drive a car too. I suggest that you write words count.

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    1. I usually sing j-pop! Why don't you go drive with me and sing a song together next time?

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  4. Your essay is easy to read. I envy your own car!!!! I think this car suit you and good naming. I want my car. Where do you like the best you have ever been?

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